The Apocalypse has happened
We as citizens have had to start making our own weapons
and the least expected had to learn how to defend them-self's 
And the intelligent turned evil
We never knew if death was around the corner
and hope was at an all time low
This is the Apocalypse
I really like your story idea and your photos really told the story. It makes sense and overall it is A+. The best photo is the last one because her neck and face are spooky and she looks super hardcore !! My least fav is the second because I feel like her description doesn't fit and her body position is awk. I think it is excellent but maybe more variation of photo subjects and angles.
ReplyDeleteI love this picture story thing. The pictures are so good, and the content is really awesome. Although the story is not very clear, I love each picture and the content. I feel like this is an amazing set, and is just really great. I would not change anything for any of the pictures. They are all brilliantly taken. Good Job.
ReplyDeletenice story and nice photos but it didn’t really look like an apocalypse to me? My favorite was the big portrait at the end. I think that since they were all female models you could have included something related to gender in the story, like women overthrow the patriarchy and now it’s some weird matriarchal anarchy idk girl power you feel me? I like the font on the first photo and I think it would have been cool to use it on all of the photos and not just captions. A+ good job. U so pro.
ReplyDeleteur photos are executed SO WELL WTF except the instagram-type filters ... yo . real talk ..... in the apocalypse does not look peachy like that ok and iphones are DEAD. UR PORTRAITS ARE ALWAYS INTERSTING WTH i rlly like how well you can connect w and photograph ppl ... u r the portrait messiah. ur story cld use some work tho i think ,,,, its not very detailed and the writing isnt as cool as the photos which are COOL AS HECK so ur not doing them justice u feel ?? theres no real storyline but im not super strict like morrison so i give you a A- good job london xoxo gossip girl
ReplyDeleteLondon I like your photo story a lot. The photos are really great but the story is a little lacking. Who are each of these people? Who were they before? Something along those lines might have helped it. I think the best photo was the one of the person with the gas mask on inside the bunker thing. I like that one because the composition is great and it looks like a true apocalypse. One not so good is maybe the one of the girl with the camo jacket in between the two walls. The composition is pretty good but it seems maybe a bit out of place. Is she hiding from something? What is she doing? Improvement would just be storyline.
ReplyDeleteThese are killer, I love them. The story made sense, it was easy to follow and also very creative. My favorite is second to last because I feel like it really fits into your story, and I love the emotion in her face. My least favorite is the picture of the girl with the knives by her face because it kind of scares me haha. I think these look good!
ReplyDeletethe story makes sense and it is a story in a way.my favorite photo is the last one. My least favorite one is the second one. I think overall its really good but if I were to change anything I would make more of a story like a beginning and end kind. Good job!
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